Thursday, January 27, 2011
Scenery description
White clouds filled the blue sky, fluffy like candy floss. Below lay the clear blue sea, glittering invitingly as waves lapped up at the shore, washing seashells and the dead leaves that occasionally floated down onto the water. Intricately designed seashells lay in the soft pale sand. Beyond the ivory white sand was lush greenery, large coconut trees casting shadows across the beach.
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Your description of the scene is a little vague. It requires more specific positioning / items that are not present in other scenes. This will allow others to visualize the scene easily and picture it in their minds, such that the scenes would not be mixed up with others (like how I did)
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